Monday, May 20, 2024

A Tale Of Love's Illusion Comments

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My ear, enchanted by your whispered tales,
Those men of lust are lost at your first sight,
But I, with deeper glance, see what prevails—
Deceit, and flaws that shatter love's delight.
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Odelana Rapheal
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After "I" is shattered by your rejection, " I pen my hopes for lands where dreams still bloom"… enchanting rhyme scheme. Good command on words. Metaphors do shine.. top

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