Sunday, October 23, 2005

A Tale Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

Hubert at 38
and weighing 427 pounds
an only child
father dead long ago
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Sylvia Chidi 18 February 2006

I enjoyed the tale. A lovely one

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So many images encapsulated one after the other, , .. the reader is allowed inside his head and then sees the tragedy from an objective position. Amazing. Thank you.

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Jenny Kilby 14 January 2006

Wow that wo there is nothing more i can really say. Jenny

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Tania S 30 December 2005

This poem is sad, it talks of lost hope

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Jordan Antrim 19 December 2005

I liked this poem a great deal I listened happily all the way through.

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Cj Heck 14 December 2005

What a thought-provoking poem, Charles. You held me from the first line to the last. You have a nice way of writing that I enjoy. Are you a natural-born storyteller, even in person? Warmest regards and respect, CJ

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Bera Tremoz 06 November 2005

Huber saw the light before disappearing in the dark for good, i'm envious. Sometimes i get dumbfounded at how far the love of a woman can push us, really... Cheers mate Berotzi

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Marcy Jarvis 23 October 2005

extremely captivating read.

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