A Tale Of Love Comments

very nice and heart stirring poem......well done... really...

A translation into Russian (with some more extra words to keep rhymes) Rasskaz o lubvi V malenʹ kom gorodke u podnozhiya sinih gor Zhila-byla yunaya devushka - milaya Fë rl, Byla ona nezhnaya i udivitelʹ naya, Ochenʹ privetlivaya i obhoditelʹ naya. V tom zhe gorode zhil slavnyĭ parenʹ ·Rem, On derzhal magazinchik « Chaĭ , kofe - vsem ' Drug druga oni polyubili, O posledstviyah pozabyli. Oba byli raznyh religiĭ , V raznyh semʹ yah rodilisʹ . V zlonamerennom obshchestve natsiĭ Mnogo rasovoĭ diskriminatsii. Eto vsyeobshchaya traditsiya V odnoi religii zhenit’sya. Obshchestvo ottorglo Ferl i Rema. Zlaya sud’ba, konets Edema. Oni dumali oba O zhizni mnogo I reshili: yesli ne zhit’ vmeste vpred’, To pochemu by im vmeste ne umeret’? Voshodyashchyee solntse sleduyushchego utra Osvetilo mertvuyu paru - ostolbenenie, sumrak. Vlyublennye dolzhny byli umeret’, i eto ne shutka, Iz - za sotsial’nyh i religioznyh predrassudkov. Davaite razrushim religioznye bar’ery, I budem schitat’ drug druga Darom Bozh’im bez mery. Davaite zabudem pro kasty i rasy I drugie beschelovechnosti grimasy, Chtoby nikakaya para ne otchuzhdalas’ opyat’, I chtoby ni v koem sluchae im snova ne umirat’.

This is a modern poem of Romeo and Juliet. 'For never was a story of more woe' but now there is. The poem is written in clear simple words, like a PROSE of life. This style only emphasizes the horror of the story.. Some sides of modern life are still awful. The author reminds us about them not calling to revolutions and new deaths, but makes readers to think. To think how to improve themself before to improve the world.... Thanks for the poem!

i like the thought but not the way you put it, its more like prose...but anyway it communicate well...good job

Great poem and true. It reminds me of a short story written by the great writer and poet Kahlil Gibran.

Wonderfully told, wonderful message. Bless your heart, Roopa. Regards.