Saturday, March 2, 2019

A Tale Of Grey Grief Comments

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A tale of grey grief
Told by a brown leaf,
All leaf ears were stiff.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Hans Vr 03 March 2019

I love this Haiku. There is an element of surprise and the kigo. Excellent!

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 March 2019

Thank you Hans Vr, but kigo is new to me despite visiting Google. You see, as the old dogs never a new trick learn, so am I at 78!

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 March 2019

withered leaf letter of stiff heart!

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 March 2019

Yes, withered leaf, but letter of stiff heart? But poems are often interpreted different than they were thought of originally. Thanks for the comments.

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