Part I: Ice
He shines like silver midnight moon -
cool marble statue, this tycoon.
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Absolutely beautiful. congratulations for such an amazing write.
'Top One-Hundred Poets Club' Out of Thousands and thousands of Poems online Mine was number sixty-five. Poet with a Thousand Kills But with weak promotion skills. Poem Hunters lose their way And, at times, become the prey All is fair in War and Love Top One-Hundred Poets Club. All contestants orchestrated Or perhaps they're all related Smiling proud with Pen in Hand We remain the Underrated. It will take a thousand Poets Just to help you stay afloat But nothing beats the satisfaction To receive an honest Vote. Poem Hunts the lamest Ducks I Searched You a thousand bucks Poison Ink reigns from above Top One-hundred Poets Club P.X #65 Charles Monroe Novus Ordo Seclorum
Dear Andrea, yours is one of the better poems I saw in the entire contest. Your poem reminded me of the style employed by Terry O'Leary in his poem The Stone. You have a definite natural talent. You may actually win a prize! ! ! Wish you all the best for the contest. But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...)
i like it! i give it a very good score. intriguing story. i just noticed HOW good the rhyming is (i've been reading poems while talking on the phone!) i just read it again. now i'll give it excellent. :) thanks for sharing
Heard your voice reading a poem, You read well - come to nyc and come to a reading - you will be well received I am sure!