A Tale Of Bhimbetka Comments

this is a very good one

You gave life to everything. You took us on another delicious learning experience. Thank you. Definitely have a sense of knowing the area. Carol

Fascinating. Time out of mind. Very educational. Ten from me. Warm regards, Sandra

As a historical narrative, this is quite a remarkable composition, Ahmad, and a rewarding one to read as it is packed full with so much knowlege of your very interesting subject. As a poem, it falls a little short, because there really is no ending to it, a summation or comment that would tie in all you spoke of prior to the ending. A closing verse would give this interesting write the poetic summation it needs.

Well written and very antique and historical in description.

Wow.I have a very strong interest in archaeology and I love this poem. I hope someday to visit these caves.Good and very interesting freeform poem.Thanks so much it really brightened my day.A ten and a big smile from me.