A Tale Of A Winter Night Comments

I like the concept here, the storyline...Inventive...Don't uppercase your text, other than for the 1st letter of a new sentence, and of course Proper Nouns....You begin the work with short, tight linage, and suddenly you branch out gurther & further with longer lines, which means more syllables, a which results in you losing the smooth flow you had started with(metre) . Now, Avleek...please understand... I am no Poet or especially gifted writer. My constructive suggestions are merely (IMO's) and subjective....Bottom line, you hjave poetic talent. Read your contemporary Poets, as opposed to our Classic Poets, as I continue to do in hopes of improving the quality of my work....Keep that pen pumping, my friend! ~FjR~

How beautiful Avelek, I feel this little boy and his Mom, his journey and all the experiences along the way in a short story of his journey, knowing his mom is there healed all his wounds. So beautiful. I truly love keep on writing, I am very proud of you! Love and Light.