Sunday, September 7, 2008

A Tale Of A Lovers Scorn Comments

Rating: 4.0

Two hearts intertwined by fate
A love so true the gods are envious
Yet why does my soul cry out in pain
The constant grasp of my imperfections
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Kellyn, A Grau
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Greenwolfe 1962 07 September 2008

I recommend this because it is a loger and frankly a better written version of the same faded love I have read on at least two other occasions today. This piece is probably the best I have read. The problem for me, is that there is nothing new contained in this writing. It may just be that this is all there is. If that is true, then this is not just good, it is great. Perhaps it deserves a better score. GW62

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