Wednesday, December 2, 2015

A Tale Of A Heart Comments

Rating: 4.8

I was happy and lone,
I was in my safe zone,
You came knocking down at my heart’s doors,
Even though it was doubly locked.
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Aayushi Saxena
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Chinedu Dike 07 December 2015

An insightful tale of heartbreak occasioned by disappointment in bliss of love, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. Love is a voyage of bliss and spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. It's also whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning, if it's not carefully nurtured by both couples at all-time to maintain its bliss. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Saxena.

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Aayushi Saxena 09 December 2015

Yea love comes unannounced and leave without warning but not without scars. Thanks for reading.

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Shakil Ahmed 02 December 2015

you have nicely painted your heartfelt thoughts with nice poetic language, thanks for sharing

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Aayushi Saxena 02 December 2015

Thanks...

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 December 2015

I painted the walls of my heart in your favorite colors, No more locked doors and no more borders.. you portray a great experience of love and at the end the great disappointment. that is life. if you come to experience a true love you are a lucky person. Everything is fleeting in this world. But continue to love. life is love. God bless you. tony

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Aayushi Saxena 02 December 2015

Thanks for reading. :)

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