i would have read
that message..a
hundred times
the tail of that message
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does it say she has not started hating me....... GOD BE WITH ME You touch the inner most soul with your words, I hope too with you.... and God be with you always my friend. Angel
comtemplation solves many things... good poem.
A nice, good thought indeed. To cite an example, if we don't receive any comments from the readers for our poems or essays, it can also mean that the views and philosophy of the contents are acceptable to the world! Otherwise, there could have been atleast a stir from a single reader! 'Do not drive me....' this view reminded me of the above. My father held the view that if we did not receive any letters from our friends and relatives, it could also mean that there were well off! What do you say of it?
a sublte love theme. i wonder you could write love poems too as skillfully as others. shan
Intelligently written poem. Interesting too. Pleasure to read it. 10+
No matter what, we always have a tail of hope which aids our return. Bob
Very provocative. May hope be found even in this succinct message. Warm regards, Sandra
That hope, that love spoken with care....looks to the heavens asking for shelter to protect that love always....beautiful work Sam...A pleasure to read, as always 10
So nice.. With very catching ideas really a tail of hope...a continuous chance..hope.. a chance to take things safely and carefully I love this...the thoughts really nice....inspiring... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia
A tail of hope a second chance to the sparkling opportunity........well done my dear...10/10
the message in the tip of the tail: be careful when you drive... well presented into a poem...10
A very intelligently written piece Samanyan....with as Lynda says ' a sting in the tail'
do not drive me to hate you? that is hope shining through. good write a ten
relationships have boundaries...if we need them we need to learn to respect the lines...regards
A message with a sting in the tail, wise words from you again, 10 Lynda xx
Interesting piece good write