Tuesday, July 28, 2009

A Tablecloth Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was raining hard in Brooklyn, on a dark December day
A priest was passing a garage sale, that was on his way
His eye caught a tablecloth, it was red and with a cross
To cover up the damage of the plaster he had lost
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Sarwar Chowdhury 04 September 2009

Compact powerful ammmmmmazing descripton! 10+

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 August 2009

I love narrative oness.... I believe, it is an art, to tell a story through a poem.. I did few narrative ones too.. I feel Stephen Stirk is a good story teller..... your ones are cool too This is touching and you kept me interested through out cheerss shan

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Fay Slimm 28 July 2009

What an account of homecoming Bob and all of thirty five years late - - incredible - -and told with your talent for the finer details - - so thrilling and the reader's interest was with it from the beginning..... wishing the couple a few more years together - - they certainly deserved it.......10 + ++ Fay...

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