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nice........... some beautiful imagery.......... keep writing and be yourself Athena *** words will change the world ***

This is good, Annie, you are off to a good start. I started writing when I was 12 too-you're writing will improve the more you expose yourself to new styles. Don't fret, write what feels right to you and don't try too hard to impress others-eventually you will develop your own unique style that you can shape and perfect.