From that day,
We parted away,
Tell me...
You never missed me,
...
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Sympathetic is necessary for humanity. you have written a wonderful work here well done
frolic of deep nemeses of truth... so loving memoirs of a true and lasting Love...i love it..God bless
Hello Shivani, Thank you... Would you please let me know what is left incomplete...
Intensity of emotions is captivating. A good poem with youthful passion.
Very remarkable poem. I can't stand to appreciate you cos you are very good at composing poem. And very talented one.
Very nice.. U could have given a perfect ending.. I mean to say that it looks a bit incomplete.. *no offence* :) overall, the poem is a great write. Keep writing.
Emotion is waving and it fill the atmosphere to be in dark, very nice written poem Jog, well expressed_Soul
very lovely...........full of emotions and love.............great work.......... :)
a heartfelt poem...dear...lovely..