A Symbol Of Pride Comments

lovely, sweet flow and great tribute to the tower!

A very unusual and deep poem.

You are a very good writer, and I have enjoyed reading your poems.. so touching, so insightful and deepness inside of you shows.... I can see how you see, you touch the imagination and florish the minds sight... Very well done indeed.. You are gifted and talented and rich in your words.. I am honored to be able to read your poetry... thank you..

When I read the title I really couldn´t imagine it to be Pisa´s Tower but really.... It was quite short and still held its imaginary feeling.

great poem and so symbolic in itself

'And perhaps one day you will kiss the soil.' - Brilliant! ! ! I loved it! 10/10

i never been their but always wanted to....good poem...i like it

I liked this a lot, I gave a very clear message.

The crafting of your words in this one is awesome......And perhaps one day you shall kiss the soil....how clever is that? ? ? ! ! Very exceptionally written. Anna

Your poems are very strong, if you are a filipino, I would have thought you are a demonstrator… you are writing under-principle, or shall I start calling you Mr. Man of Principle… anyways, nice read! we are proud! :)

I'm proud of u man! ! ! I LOVED IT <3 WOOOOOOOOOOW well done I couldnt stop reading

yeap the symbol of pride bloomed here beautifully! excellent work out! 10+

The poem belongs to symbolism, in the architectural sense, because of the visual association between an object, Pisa tower, and the thoughts of a pride man. At the same time the architecture's visual language is less flexible and it is more powerful, by making the poem to be excellent...10+++

I love how you use reality to describe reality, and the image of pride in a building of great... can't find the word...I want to say a building of great acknowledgement for it is well known, instead of a human of small significance... that was the word a building of great significance... also I love how you used the world stalwart to comprehensate pride. Very well thought, placed, and worded. It is the kind of poem that you can't figure out by just reading the first line or stanze, you have to read it all and as you read it its wording just takes you away...

such a wonderful meaning and powerful words! ! ! i liked the concept of the poem....nice poem sir jhee...

an excellent poem on the famous tower.it has been hinted that it might fall one day. 'And perhaps one day you shall kiss the soil.' such a thing is never likely to happen as there are 24 hours maintenance works voted10 surya

an excellent poem on the famous tower.it has been hinted that it might fall one day. 'And perhaps one day you shall kiss the soil.' such a thing is never likely to happen as there are 24 hours maintenance works voted10 surya

The pride sheilds you so well.Excellent piece.

a symbol of pride...a pride of standing still no matter what had happened...thanks best regards, jdh

Pride is the sympol of trust and loyalty, great write.