Wednesday, July 13, 2011

A Swing, It Is Comments

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the puzzle of it
the forth and back
push, pull,
please go
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Ben Partenay
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Adeline Foster 12 August 2011

Good, of course it's not a Hiaku, but it is written in Haiku style. Try mine - Indebted - Adeline

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Gone Away 13 July 2011

I like this....nice analogy.

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