Saturday, June 23, 2007

A Sweet Thang Needs Sugar...(Humor) Comments

Rating: 4.8

All I want is love...
Say it.
All I want is the world...
Wrap it.
...
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Rick Adriolo 07 April 2015

Oh yes.. needed a poem like this! :) made my day!

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James B. Earley 14 April 2008

A brilliant solution to my tears....a one-way ticket to Montego Bay! Great advice my friend.

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Marc Mannheimer 08 September 2007

Love, the world, not to cry anymore - that just about covers it. I had that all - in deluded moments, then the hammer fell. Thanks for the re-greeting - I have been writing, just not posting. - Marc

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fanniesson - 02 July 2007

I’m not gonna say I didn’t see the ending coming and still it floored me. For me an enjoyable read

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Top chick... razor-sharp... t x

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Alison Cassidy 29 June 2007

A light-hearted rant from a needle sharp pen with a memorable final line. Stylish, succinct and thoroughly satisfying. love, Allie xxxx

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Ted Sheridan 24 June 2007

Only vodka? This sounds like it calls for some major drinking...

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Walt Martin 23 June 2007

Brave, Bold, and dashingly Irreverent, highlighted in that contumeliously magnificent final verse! ! !

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Not a member No 4 23 June 2007

Yes, this is clear. A powerfuelled antidote to the vagaries of love. Good close! ! xx jim

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Marci Made 23 June 2007

I'm with you on this but no Montego Bay, you'll like Grand Cayman Island better...I use Puffs. Your last line is priceless and the endind stick why I say no Montego Bay with just cause......Your write here is cute, , , did I just say that? yes, well it is....marci.xo

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elysabeth faslund

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