Friday, July 16, 2010

A Sweet Surrender Comments

Rating: ★4.5

A kiss.
Just one.
That's all it took
to make me float on air.
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Felicity Slaughter
kiss surrender Firework
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Ruby Honeytip 01 October 2012

This is just gorgeous writing. You have beautiful and obvious talent [3

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Asif Andalib 30 September 2012

The first sweet kiss of a lover. A lovely write. My favorite lines are A kiss. Just one. That's all it took for me to shoot up into the sky like a firework and explode into a swirl of sparks and all the colors of a artist's pallette.

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Felicity Slaughter

Felicity Slaughter

New Port Richey, Florida
Felicity Slaughter
Felicity Slaughter
New Port Richey, Florida
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