Friday, April 6, 2007

A Sweet Summer Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

As purple blossoms glisten in the rain,
the birds chirp their sweet summer song.
Lingering scents of lilac delights my senses,
so I close my eyes and ponder thoughts of you.
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Shelley L Baxter
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Alex Y. 22 July 2007

Nicely done, this is really pretty, it makes me get all tingly inside...lol. Keep writing :)

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... Sheila 30 May 2007

I was beginning to think that summer didn't happen here in Canada, but today is absolutely gorgeous! This poem is beautiful!

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Melvina Germain 29 April 2007

I agree with both of my poet friends here and as I said previously, you are a special poet, a poetic artist at work. Fabulous Shelley--Melvina--

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David Harris 10 April 2007

Shelly, this is a lovely poem with a flow that just carries you along as you read. You have a sharp eye for detail that makes the imagery stand out. Great write my friend. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David.

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Jamal Ludin 07 April 2007

very pretty imagery appealing to the intellect

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Shelley L Baxter

Shelley L Baxter

Calgary, Canada.
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