Tuesday, June 3, 2014

A Sweet Song Of A Frozen Lake Comments

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Too many emotions unexpressed spoil my soul
Words after words unsaid piled up and frozen into a lake
Roughed up very badly by a lousy tough wind
And always kept awake by the loud sounds of cracking
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Abdul Wahab
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Colleen Courtney 03 June 2014

Love this sweet and beautiful poem. It is an amazing experience when we find the one we can open up to and tell all our secret dreams, hopes and aspirations with. When we are lucky enough to find this special someone it does seem as if the words flow smoothly and easily. Nicely written poem!

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