Thursday, October 29, 2009

A Sweet Love Story... Comments

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Tickled by the dew…flower smiled..
Sunrays blessed her with a rainbow..
She sweetly presented to sister earth..
Sky was in love with earth..
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Lakshmi Karat
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Lakshmi K. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 06 February 2017

An insightful train of thought, well articulated and nicely penned. The line, 'Tickled by the dew...the flower smiled, ' is absolutely beautiful and poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing Lakshmi.

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