A Sweet Lonely Horse Comments
You should have seen him standing
In the midst of a snow-field scene
Shivering slightly as he stood
For the winter was extra mean.
...
Read full text
A sweet lovely poem by Marilyn Lott! Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
Marilyn, I love this! I think it's one of your very best. Well-deserved as poem of the day. Congratulations!
i notice marilyn hasn't posted a poem in ph for nearly eleven years. as to this one, i like how it flows easily and regularly and is rhymed skillfully. snow-field scene, dilapidated house, and mittened hand are all phrases that show facility with language and fit in meter and tone the rest of the poem. lastly, i like the lack of pretense and accessibility of it. -gk
You are mistaken, Glen. Marilyn has posted three poems just this month, including this one, which is her newest and was only posted day before yesterday!
I meant to say that she has posted FIVE poems this month, not just three.
Hello, Glen, thank you so much for your comments. I appreciate them. Yes, Kim Barney was right, I post on a regular basis.
I love horses.My first love when I was a kid..Wonderful poem that brought back a child hood memory... a ten..
You should have seen him standing! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
We spent half an hour or so It was nice for us both, of course I'll always remember that chilly day When I visited a sweet lonely horse! An endearing poem, Marilyn! The picture of a handsome horse! Hearty Congratulations!
He needed a friend I suppose. - - - - - - - - Friendship is a two way process - - - Every living being need companion.Horse is a good friend of man. A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.
a lovely descriptive poem of a wonderful meeting? ............well penned Marilyn
So beautiful poem of yours being picked as members POTD. Congratulations Marilyn.
Marilyn, such a great poem of the day... congrats for being selected.... huge 10++++
Beautiful depiction has been made on horse and its nature. Thanks and congratulations for POD.
A lovely and thoughtful poem coupled with a picture of a wonderful horse. It expresses in beautiful detail the harshness of nature that brings hardship to everyone.10
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
9/5/2025 4:45:23 PM # 1.0.0
Thank you, everyone, it won't let me duplicate a reply!