Friday, March 25, 2016

A Sweet Dawn Of Desire: -01: Memories Comments

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Memories- Sweet or Sour

Always do us a favour.
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Prativa Rani 01 December 2017

Before we could realize Eternal bliss of being together Can no more be a reality And that we would go on longing for Monotonously, for being closer Ever after, again and again. Nice poem. I thank you very much sir for this wonderful poem....10+++++ Rani

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Prativa Rani 01 December 2017

Before we could realize Eternal bliss of being together Can no more be a reality And that we would go on longing for Monotonously, for being closer Ever after, again and again. Nice poem, thank you very much sir for this wonderful poem....10+++++ Great lines....... Wistful longings and the pain of being separated are poignantly expressed!

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Prativa Rani 01 December 2017

Great lines..........! Wistful longings and the pain of being separated are poignantly expressed! 10+++

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soumya 22 November 2017

Vast hollowness filling Each and every inch of my Existence. In my corridor of dreams Love is the only candle of hope, You are the only Shed for my desires. Thank you for sharing this poem 10+++++++++

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Rajendra Rout 12 November 2017

Before we could realize Eternal bliss of being together Can no more be a reality And that we would go on longing for Monotonously, for being closer Ever after, again and again. Nice poem.thanku very much sir for this wonderful poem....10+++++for it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 November 2017

Love is the only candle of love.. depth in the draft touches the sky. A fascinating poem. Loved it!

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Valsa George 05 December 2016

Life without you yet living for you On this planet of estranged space. Vast hollowness filling Each and every inch of my Existence. Great lines..........! Wistful longings and the pain of being separated are poignantly expressed!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

Thank you revered Ma'am for your gracious reading and beautiful remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 20 June 2016

Before we could realize Eternal bliss of being together Can no more be a reality And that we would go on longing for Monotonously, for being closer Ever after, again and again. Nice poem. Thanks.10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

Thank you Neetu for your reading and beautiful remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 10 June 2016

Before we could realize Eternal bliss of being together Can no more be a reality And that we would go on longing for Monotonously, for being closer Ever after, again and again. Beautiful and platonic. Thanks for the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

Thank you for the beautiful remarks.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 20 May 2016

In my corridor of dreams Love is the only candle of hope, You are the only Shed for my desires Nice poem to read. Thanks for the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

Thank you Sanjukta for your gracious reading and beautiful remarks.

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Sonali Kumari 09 April 2016

Nice lines...... And touchy :)

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Sonali Ganguly 29 March 2016

very well written.... keep writing & give us the opportunity to read you more and more....

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

Thank you Sonali Ma'am for your gracious reading and beautiful remarks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2016

Always do us a favour. With the flavour of love. Nice work.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

Thank you revered Sir for your gracious reading and beautiful remarks.

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