Friday, June 8, 2007
A Sweet And Savory Dance Comments
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When I’m with you
I see stardust and wishes and
Sapphire moonbeams...
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7/25/2025 12:49:23 PM # 1.0.0
On initial reading, I thought 'stardust' was a little cliche, but you then had so many other colourful and original images in this poem - I loved 'vermillion prayer', 'salmon sunsets' and that whole verse...a great read.