A Swan Song Reverie Comments

As I read your poem it makes me think that the person you are describing could be a ballat dancer or a model possibly. I love the grace of swans & have written a poem called 'Two Swans in Love' (where they join together to form a heart with their necks close together) I will submit this one soon.

What a wonderful poem indeed.. your poem captured my heart.... very beautiful, nice lines.... I think this is the best I have read of yours.. lovess shan

A very delicate piece beautifully composed Sonya

I adore this piece..A swan in a reverie of dance..Thanks for sharing :) A.

Sometimes fragility is beautiful. This is one of those times. Exceptional, Sonya.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

You have captured beauty, grace and movement all at once, Sonya. A great poem that shares the moment. N

Indeed a beautiful song and very delicate. Best wishes!

Very beautiful, I see very tiny remnants of rhyme, but not really rhymed is it? good imagery. It is one of my favorites of yours so far.

such reverie here...well written poem! ! ! Thanks...........

love it! lovely and delicate...

.....Never looked down.....; the real quality of life lies in equality, right? Excellent job, sonya!

Everything about this poem is graceful - the slender form and considered words; 'Giselle...ethereal/ And fragile...' - simply beautiful. S :)

''Never looked down As if she knew that once she does She'll never be found'' So she faced her dreams and fears...