# #a Survival Plan Comments

god proposes man opposes nature disposes

Point well written, in a form and meaning anyone can understand. Brevity is not lacking in this, and though serious in nature, can be thought of as 'joke is on you! ' Excellent! xxxElys

Stolen, but, stolen well. A stolen treat maybe but now revealed for the benefit of all. Thanks for sharing the treasure with us. Angel

wonderful descriptive realistical poem, very well written and an excellent message..........10++++++++++

A strong, faithful message..Power.. Through a story..10++

a symbolical story with good information. shan

Its a good story about power and faith. Nicely captured.

You wrote this with wisdom and faith. A strong message you always conveyed in your write. This is a great.

Wohhh...stolen story or a shower of glory! ! ! What an enormous theory of survival. Reasong.. is what lacks... Humans think... we are differnt than animal We have brain... we are intelligent... But that intelligence... just falls short to reason. Yes... only he who has seen the drought Can think of survival and ways to it. Life... a wonderful master theory... hot spot Who can crack its mystery....? Yes... He is... The one who can reason each bit of it. Wonderful, dear poet. I just love this write. You have put the right thoughts at right stanza Making the whole read, a great delight.

Great plan woven with deep thoughts to think from it! ! ! .....well done! ! ! 10/10

Bad farming practises have eroded many hectares of land, top soil fllows down our rivers to be deposited in the oceans. You are so right we should stick to Gods plan. Bob 10++

Thank you for this insightful verse---

Imagination and the final insight are really good ...10

a deep poem of fate, resemble in faith; as it belong to human reason....what a beautiful write of the inner feeling of the One whom our faith believed the wonder of immortality....thank you for sharing, a great survival plan of our destiny.....a 10 +

a gud opinion......very nicely written and paragraphed..........10

I am not sure if I commented on this earlier, but I enjoyed reading it a lot..its very narrative, very beautifully written

Man, for years have tried to control destiny but fails in his attempt to control nature...only mother nature understands the when, what, and why of her creation like a mother knows when, what, and why her baby cries. Thankis for sharing this poem...a 10

Your conclusion is superb and so very true. 10/10. kind wishes, Sandra

good survival plan SLN...thanks

the last two lines are very significant.sometimes not to be in control is a better bargain.nice insight.thanks