in the midnight hours
my soul abruptly taps
me on my cheek
into wakefulness
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'surreal silhoutte' an apt ending to a great imagery. (Bhavukatha at its best)
wonderful 1! the surreal imageries seems greatly evolve into magic realism! excellent! 10+
a good poem well written showing your masterliness. shan
From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 9/9/2009 8: 24: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: a surreal moment ' I certain read along and find much to relate too in the sense that life is full of these moments that just seem to have no explaination to.
A beautiful piece that captures the essence of the haunting and mysterious midnight hours with rare elegance.
How many times has my soul tapped me in the midnight hour but unlike you I did not have the thought to observe it. Therefore I did not put it on paper, and had I it would not have been as superb as your effort. One word comes to mind WOW! 10
I am always impressed by the imagery you create... This surreal moment is a wonderful example; how words create a painting and how images travel from mind to mind... amazing piece Indira...
indeed this description is that of a surreal moment... i like it much!
.....and the landscape freezes...... beautiful, indira........
a wonderful poem..with great imagery condusive to the theme...very nice...10
Lovely imagery in this piece Indira....A surreal moment is a very appropriate title for this poem..Cheers
and the landscape freezes into a surreal silhouette Rachel Ann Butler
all around me faint shadows of increasing complexities and absurdities grow larger than life and present a shadow play Rachel Ann Butler