Sunday, September 6, 2009

A Surreal Moment Comments

Rating: 3.7

in the midnight hours
my soul abruptly taps
me on my cheek
into wakefulness
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indira babbellapati
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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

all around me faint shadows of increasing complexities and absurdities grow larger than life and present a shadow play Rachel Ann Butler

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Sathyanarayana M V S 18 September 2009

'surreal silhoutte' an apt ending to a great imagery. (Bhavukatha at its best)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2009

wonderful 1! the surreal imageries seems greatly evolve into magic realism! excellent! 10+

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 11 September 2009

a good poem well written showing your masterliness. shan

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Indira Babbellapati 09 September 2009

From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 9/9/2009 8: 24: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: a surreal moment ' I certain read along and find much to relate too in the sense that life is full of these moments that just seem to have no explaination to.

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Anand Madhukar 09 September 2009

A beautiful piece that captures the essence of the haunting and mysterious midnight hours with rare elegance.

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Patrick A. Martin 09 September 2009

How many times has my soul tapped me in the midnight hour but unlike you I did not have the thought to observe it. Therefore I did not put it on paper, and had I it would not have been as superb as your effort. One word comes to mind WOW! 10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 08 September 2009

huh.............................................

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Dr Kamran Haider 08 September 2009

I am always impressed by the imagery you create... This surreal moment is a wonderful example; how words create a painting and how images travel from mind to mind... amazing piece Indira...

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indeed this description is that of a surreal moment... i like it much!

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Rakesh Bedi 07 September 2009

.....and the landscape freezes...... beautiful, indira........

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Ency Bearis 06 September 2009

a wonderful poem..with great imagery condusive to the theme...very nice...10

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Sandra Martyres 06 September 2009

Lovely imagery in this piece Indira....A surreal moment is a very appropriate title for this poem..Cheers

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Rachel Butler 06 September 2009

and the landscape freezes into a surreal silhouette Rachel Ann Butler

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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