Wednesday, November 17, 2004

A Surprise Visit Comments

Rating: 3.2

At four o’clock she knocked at the door
I’d never seen a goddess before.
She wore a dress of shimmering light
Around her waist a cord drawn tight.
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Pete Crowther
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Robert Howard 26 November 2006

Absolutely delightful. I love the way your pulled us in from the mundane to the mythical world with the greatest of ease.

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Philippa Lane 24 July 2005

I agree with Raynette Eitel. So good, such a whimsical poem. I always love the titles you give your poems.

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Raynette Eitel 20 May 2005

Great description of Hathor, Peter. This is so funny and whimsical. Thanks for sharing. Raynette

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Scarborough Gypsy 28 March 2005

I don't understand this one Peter. Who or what is Hathor? Pardon my ignorance.

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Philippa Lane 19 March 2005

This had me in fits of laughter...I'm sorry, but your poetry just hits the right spot with me! !

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Hull, East Yorkshire, England
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