A Surprise Before Your Eyes Comments

breeze passed through the lonely hearts Gently caressing, feeling their pain Said it, “Thou wilting Mozarts! Wake up and create the enchanting love strain.” The pious hymns of loves echoed around Stirring the dead souls, dead dreams But oh! ! The land of love couldn’t be found The music got lost in shrill screams. story of a great; aunt' it realistic pictures

well told story...had fun reading it...love...NH

What a nice way to tell a story. I like it very much Anjana

Colleen this is a lovely story told with your usual style and I can hear it all before me you see.