Monday, January 22, 2024

A Suppressed Sob Comments

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When I write Gaza,
my pen bleeds red,
I am drowned
in the sea of hatred.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Gaza…..My pen bleeds red. Whose doesn't!

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4) (Contd) . No such claim is made by the terrorist government of Israel, the terrorist outfit feigning as a nation (tofn) . Why is uncle sam so spineless? I don't have a right to say this, because the singularist government of my nation sides with the tofn. I am just pained and hang my head in shame!

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3) (Contd) the European nations and China "condemned" the act by the terrorist army. But terrorist uncle sam says "he is looking into two competing versions of the incident". No such claim is made even by the terrorist government of

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2) (Contd..) the army of the terrorist outfit named Israel confirmed the incident and claimed they opened fire on the unarmed civilians including women and children, "believing that they posed a threat". We have heard this version many times now. We will hear it again

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On 29 February 2024, Israel's terrorist army opened fire on thousands of Palestinian civilians who had gathered at a UN aid camp for food water and medicine. As of 01 March,112 persons were killed and another 750 plus injured

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Noted poet, Aarzoo Mehek has made a detailed note on this poem. I wait for the Note to show up. How long, PoemHunter?

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" Poetry speaks to me" writes my friend and talented poet Sylvia Frances Chan.

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A dhikr transforms into a stream of unshed tears and the Mediterranean gets filled in its salt

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Poet Sylvia Frances Chan has commented in very detail on the poem. Thank you, Sylvia. I hope PoemHunter will show them soon

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2024

MyNOTE: I am very sorry for all my mini errors, I typed too fast and sent the message too quick, once again I apologize, Unnikrishnan, and thank YOU for your understanding

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2024

A Suppressed Sob, a subtle beautiful Title.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2024

This music/tunes are still echoing inmy ewars, most beautiful, as if I am onm holidays again in Turkey.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2024

It is the way it is created and worded, all Compliments to you, Unnikrishnen, you worded it perfect, my great respect for that. TOP Marks and myriad more.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2024

It looks like I am in the midst of these activities, though using the foreigns words, I do understand the meaning of it Not because of myself, BUT because you worded this poem in true Poetry and Poetry speaks to me, nomatter the subject

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Every Palestinian is facing an inevitable murder anytime now. But uncle sam just ‘stands and watches'…. Shame on his love for liberty, love and equality

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 January 2024

The martyrs are in a much better place than this blood drippen ugly earth. A very very sensitive poem. My eyes are wet with pain praying for peace. Thanks for writing for them.

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Very true, Aarzoo. The people of Palestine, betrayed time and again by the entire world (which now includes India) are facing extinction.

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Message from PoemHunter "Poet Reynaldo Casison rated a poem titled A Suppressed Sob 5- star ratings" Thank you, dear poet. Obliged

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2) The Sema is a 700-year-old ritual or a rite of communal recitation which combines the poetry of Rumi, Turkish classical music, chanting from the Koran and the whirling of the dervishes.

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Sema is a Sufi ceremony performed as part of the meditation and prayer practice dhikr. Sama means 'listening', while dhikr means 'remembrance'.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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