A Supermarket Christmas Allegory Comments
Abandoned prams, empty identical wired
with white typed feeding bibs about
and missing their coin deposits, chains dangling, unhired.
Staggering down the street they come, accepted
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Wonderful.... and not long till another 'distant' choice is upon you... check-out land here we come!
Working as I do for a supermarket, I know just what you mean! Great poem Philip, very well written. Andrew
heaps of thought to ponder on in this one Phillip lots of effort put into this very good work
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7/31/2025 12:18:50 PM # 1.0.0
A deep and intruiging piece of complex allegorical prose You depth of vocabulary amply demonstrated by you word usag to conjure up such imagery. Though I am afraid it s little above the average readers comprehension.Readers tend to grow bored with longer poems which must be read and reread to grasp thier meaning ivorAka poetic piers