A Sunset Song Comments

‘…Time like a brave old rooftop slants with snow, /Pictures the elegance of far ago, …’ Excellent portrayal of Time…ever read….thanks Ma’am for sharing…loved it much Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

Words warm the heart and paint woundrously. So beautiful. 10

dear sandraji, sun will set everyday... but your poetic sun will never......

Sandra, this poem is perfection, love the imagery and warm gentleness of your words. Cindy

Your sunset's song is a most wonderful piece Sandra, lovely words. Best wishes, Andrew x

A wonderful poem. Love it.10++

An amazing piece of write. I enjoyed reading this beautiful work.

a delightful piece.. hope is there..lovely words..

line 5 WONDERFUL! Bill Grace

Thank you. Bill Grace

There are colourful images in your words and mellifluous music in the way they flow. I absolutely love this piece. Thanks for sharing your wonderful gift. Take care

I'm with Ben on this one. Several meanings, but only one that is sad. This should be published....it is that good. A song of images only you could write! ! xxElysabeth

I admire your intertwining images and thoughts as well as selection of just the right words, all so successfully done which provides much more imbedded meanings to uncover.

Painted indeed - what a gorgeous picture. Hugs Anna xxx

I'm there. I'll start the fire and put on a pan of cocoa. I'll pour you a cup. Would you like marshmallows?

your words have painted a glorious sunset with such beautiful imagry and comparisons of snow and time which continues into the seasons and future with past memories, , blessings..Cecil

Sandra, a top piece of writing...full of feeling. Ian

Beauty and loss are often somehow intertwined in memory... I love sitting at the hearthfire of your words, Sandra. Esther xx

a very lonely poem, and well penned

The first stanza of this is quite simply one of the best I've ever read, the second is typical of your unusual view of things. A great poem. Patrick