A Sunrise Song. Comments

Wilt warm the world with peace and dove-desire? Beautiful poem shared.

I think the more poems from his age I read the more comfortable I am with this style of writing- -he is certainly a poet with massive poetic skills

Hast thou perchance repented, Saracen Sun? Wilt warm the world with peace and dove-desire? fine and very meaningful word combinations adds beauty to the poem.... thank u dear poet.. tony

Shining sands! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A Sunrise Song- Sweet and dazzling like the rays of a morning sun. Thanks.

A sunrise song shines bright!

Such a great poem posted here... Still alive like a sunrise...

A nicely penned poem, thanks for the lovely poem shared. 10 for it.

Great write. Congratulations for being selected as the poem of the day.

Purple with Paynim rage and wrack desire, Dashed ravening out of a dusty lair of Storm, Harried the west, and set the world on fire? Nicely penned poem. Thanks.

Thy silver passages of sacred lands, With news of Sepulchre and Dolorous Hill, Beautiful lines of the poem. Thanks poet.

Wilt warm the world with peace and dove-desire? Great poem, thanks for sharing.

oh..wow.. sun can do wonders for it could make one create wonderful poem

What a sloppy first verse! A pilgrim traveled to a certain place, the palmer visited everywhere. So the sun must be a pilgrim except that the sun has no certain place to go except round and round in the sky! And it certainly cannot be both! And how the sun can discourse is a mystery. The sun shines and that’s it. This is a meaningless metaphor. What in the activity or appearance of the sun can give the writer leave to have it tell a religious story?

Sun is the power of heat! What mercy can be expected from it? Atmosphere filters Sun's rays and saves Earth long! It is in man's hand to make or mar what the poet desires by this simple poem!

Beautiful use of symbol- the sun; a symbol of awakening, a symbol ob joy and hope, a symbol of courage and so on: so is the message of tyhis poem.

thats nice :) i like dis one

Definition of 'palmer' from Merriam-Webster's online dictionary: Date: 13th century : a person wearing two crossed palm leaves as a sign of a pilgrimage made to the Holy Land Definition of “painim” (aka 'paynim') from Webster’s Revised Unabridged Dictionary: A pagan; an infidel