Friday, September 20, 2019

A Sunrise Ballet Comments

Rating: 4.4

With the morning's yellow rays
And with blowing gentle breeze
Leaves of coconut tree ballerinas
Are dancing to the music of wind
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KAVIN CHARALAN
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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 September 2019

A fantastic prose poem....10+++++

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Akhtar Jawad 21 September 2019

Gentle breeze as if coming from the silky hairs Kelsea Ballerini, long leaves of coconut trees moving like her smooth legs, her song supported by music, Kavin Charlan rightly says it a Sunrise Ballet. I salute his mastery in describing this beautiful scene in only five lines. A wonderful poem.

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