It was a sunny day,
With you shinning bright,
You being my sun,
And lighting my life with your light.
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Its a great to have sunny day and sunny smile, i wish both upon ur days...thanks dear hinal for always never forget to keep in touch with me, wish you very best year in this 201..even more when it go upward... :) _Soul
Very good Jinal, I really like this poem and it flowed together nicely, thought to thought.
I could feel your sunny day's rays on me. Thanks for sharing the sunshine... :)
Like this a good poem. And a good write. Thankyou very much for your kind comments On my poems.
I like very much the rhyming in the poem. Very well written. Especially the last two lines are really great.
Good poem for my school the poem is all rhyme thank you 🥰😁😊