A Sunbeam Comments

Very nice metaphor, I sometimes wish I could stop the sun from setting, but tomorrow is another day :)

Beautiful, nostalgic grief. And yet the sun still shines somewhere just beyond the shadows. My applause for this one, Jolanta. Warmest regards, Sandra

Been there, done that! Thank You!

A lovely poem, very well crafted and mournful in its way, steve

Sad, but a brilliant poem and use of words.