Saturday, April 11, 2009

A Sun Ray Comments

Rating: 4.7

A sun ray that brightens a day
And make us want it to stay
The warmth fills us in ways
That make us happy anyway
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Eve Anderson
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Nithya Raghavan 12 April 2009

beautiful rhyme scheme! well done! keep it up!

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Pink Poozle 12 April 2009

Well done! Fabulous write! All your poems are from the heart, as I can see! I love the sun, obviously you like the sun awsell! :)

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