Thursday, August 29, 2013

A Summering Day~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

My bed of blossoms - awaken
While the skirt of dawn simply sways
Embroidered leaves & butterflies embellish
While euphoria warms in the new sun's rays;
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 06 September 2013

Patricia, thank you again for reading my words. Your comments are very much appreciated.

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Patricia Grantham 04 September 2013

I really enjoyed this very lovely poetic write. A beautiful bed of flowers basking in the sunlight and coming to rest at night in the flower bed. A well crafted poem.

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