Tuesday, February 20, 2007

A Summer's Farewell Comments

Rating: 4.7

Think of me as your face is brushed
By the gentle ocean breeze,
And as it softly sweeps through palms
And rustles all the leaves;
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Linda Coker
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Chuck Audette 23 February 2007

I love the relaxing rhyme and repeated line to 'Think of me' (looks so easy) . Nice twist to the ending. 10! -chuck

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Esther Leclerc 21 February 2007

Linda, what a great, easygoing feel to this! Maybe it's my California girl years calling to me. Sweet and lovely. Esther : ]

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