Wednesday, July 5, 2006

A Summer Evening Comments

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Imagine, the need for peace and solitude
Found on a serene summer evening,
When sunsets are attractive and beautiful
And the brilliant colors seem to be weaving.
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Joseph T. Renaldi
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Chantelle Clark 05 July 2006

Very nice read, loved the imagery and good use of end rhyme to make the poem flow. This helps with the atmosphere which you have conveyed very thoroughly through these warming words. Keep up the good work.

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Ruby Root 05 July 2006

Hi Joseph, What a beautiful poem. Your use of vivid imagery is excellent. You are a great writer. I enjoyed this poem very much. Take care

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Joseph T. Renaldi

Joseph T. Renaldi

Frackville, Pennsylvania
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