Thursday, May 8, 2008

A Suicidal Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is it not that life is precious?
Each person must be cautious
In venturing life's pathways,
To be alive and happy always!
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Philip Housiaux 08 May 2008

Enjoyed feeling worthless is serious - its like something in the air, loss of purpose seems to lead to loss of discipline and self respect. Good work

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Original Unknown Girl 08 May 2008

Good penning, poignant poetic offering Marvin. I am so glad I read beyond the title, you convey emotions well and show with positivity the option that life holds. HG: -) xx

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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