A Sudden Storm Comments

Wow that certainly took me on a dynamic journey. Thank you Asma.....

A real good poem. Very vivid.

good poem................

Nice poem. Please keep writing

A remarkable description of a storm and it fury, your imagry is spectacular. You paint a fantastic pictue and you do it well. Excellent work Asma, I truly enjoyed the read.--Melivna--

strongly it reminds Wordsworth

hi asma great thought Life does not consist mainly, or even largely, of facts and happenings. It consists mainly of the storm of thought that is forever flowing through one's head a 10 for ur storm of thoughts peace jibin...........

This is really superb descriptive writing; I'm not surprised it has got so many '10s'.

The life of a storm fabulously depicted in this poem. the imagery and structure outstanding. All the best, Diane

The imagry in this poem is absolutely fantastic, thanks for the running explanations, fabulous--great poem Asma--Melvina--

Asma, I love this! It reminds me of my Southern Rain poem only your imagery and feeling are approached differently! Good work! ! ! Susan :)

I am not going to say anything that hasn't been said before about this wonderful work, but I would just like to add my voice to the throng! ! (Loved the line about the trees 'sashaying to the rhythm'...!) Good stuff - thanks. Jon.

nature's fury becomes more furious with your words -as if everything will be wiped off from the face of earth.but then there is reconciliation also...beautiful

I have no words! It's the landscape come alive by your magical expression! I went through the whole turmoil and again gently traversed the gentle, reassuring shores! ! ! ! ! ! Bravo, Asma! !

I loved the creativity shown by you here. The single lines in between, works like anchors binding the verses together. A true display of brilliance and talent, keep them coming for us... we are all loving it! Complete 10 for you here.

fabulous! I'm adding this to my favourites.... you capture the total intensity of the storm and mirror it with feelings too! I love this asma.... Humber Girl: -)

another great poem asma...where have you been hiding? ? ? ? ......Vallerie

Brilliant poem, really brings the picture of a storm to life. Marilyn