Thursday, November 3, 2011

A Sudden Sadness Comments

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</>A sudden sadness
spills over me
Like liquid lead
The lump in my throat
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Israh Sadan
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Cody Williamson 03 November 2011

I like the last stanza, that shock to find something new and unwanted about yourself. Keep on writing, you do so wonderfully :)

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