Saturday, January 10, 2009

A Sudden Rain Comments

Rating: 3.9

The fog turned everything gray
There was nowhere to escape
I tried to run but it caught me by the tail
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Sonya Florentino
fog
COMMENTS
Bryan Alexander 25 September 2009

I love the rain.......

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C. P. Sharma 09 September 2009

A vivid imagery of unwelcome rains penned so romantically. CP

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Yelena M. 30 August 2009

A beautiful picture of falling rain and feelings..you are a true romantic, Sonya.Thanks for sharing. Y.M.

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Nikunj Sharma 14 August 2009

Cute, sweet poem, with a tinge of tenderness.....keep it up. Read my poem called The rain song and An ode for the rain...

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Angelica Dela Cruz 02 August 2009

kinda like despair or maybe a zit. they come when you least expect it and make you feel horrible. nice poem. :)

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Rakesh Bedi 01 August 2009

Nice imagery sonya; with a befitting conclusion.

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Azcuena Acosta 14 July 2009

wow that was nice...

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Ruth Walters 14 July 2009

fog and rain......so horrible and yet when I was young they were both exciting...how strange.... your poem evoked these memories Ruthy

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Sandra Fowler 12 February 2009

I like your gray picture. You are a very fine imagist. Kind regards, Sandra

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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