Monday, October 3, 2005

A Sudden Ending Comments

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People in a different place,
Would regard the human race,
With malice ungrounded,
And hatred unfounded.
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Susan Williams 17 November 2015

Very creative ending, Nick Hilton. Some might say that it is troub

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Lori Boulard 03 October 2005

I am intrigued by this one and think the structure idea fits well, but the ending, well, is maybe a bit too sudden. Could just be me, but if you insinuated that the bomb drops, or we fade away, it would make the reader think a little harder.

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