People in a different place,
Would regard the human race,
With malice ungrounded,
And hatred unfounded.
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I am intrigued by this one and think the structure idea fits well, but the ending, well, is maybe a bit too sudden. Could just be me, but if you insinuated that the bomb drops, or we fade away, it would make the reader think a little harder.
Very creative ending, Nick Hilton. Some might say that it is troub