A Sudden Downpour Comments
Rain beats down on the window pane
As the flood gates of Heaven suddenly open
It is pouring out in torrential flow
Like a Reservoir, all at once, broken
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After an angry couple's furious fight, As the house goes back to an uncanny calm, The rain has vanished, leaving little trace Cooling the Earth and causing no harm...this metaphorical expression is beautiful.
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After an angry couple's furious fight, As the house goes back to an uncanny calm, The rain has vanished, leaving little trace Cooling the Earth and causing no harm...... touching expression on a metaphorical base. Brilliant concluding. Marvelous work.5 stars.
A humorous ending capping this wonderful exposition on rainfall.
A great poem with incisive finishing! Those two lines, " The rain has vanished, leaving little trace/Cooling the Earth and causing no harm'....Just beautiful! it gives me immense pleasure to read this endearing piece of poetry time and again dear madam!
Nice images through out the poem- the closing lines in particular. A well written poem that smoothly flows. Tfs Valsa 10+
After an angry couple's furious fight, As the house goes back to an uncanny calm, The rain has vanished, leaving little trace Cooling the Earth and causing no harm... soothing poem
In slanting sheets, it almost pounds Flooding roads and making puddle Gushing through pipes and rushing down drains Water floods, causing men to waddle....the rhythm is utter captivating! A magnificent poem! My great pleasure reading it time and again!
Rain that hides behind the clouds comes down to the earth in silver strings and cleanse the plants to their splendid gleam. Beautiful
Such magic of dancing words on the page with images so vivid and detailed! This poem goes with the season of late Autumn, and complements wonderfully its ambiance!
Rain has its abode in heavens so high And hides behind clouds of mournful gloom In silver strings, it spans the Earth And cleanses the plants in resplendent gleam....The beauty of poetic expression is captivating! A great poem!
The opening stanza of this marvelous poem consists of powerful lines that draw a reader to go through with the whole write. It expresses in beautiful detail the sudden downpour, its.effects on Earth and after effects. Great imagery. In a few seconds the reader could feel.and see the sudden downpour. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Enjoyed reading it.10+++
Sudden is the wind, coming to shoo away the clouds/And the sky is once more cerulean blue/As the music stops and the humdrum stills/The water seeps, giving no evident clue.....This is my favorite poem! It's my great pleasure reading it time and again! I had some technical problem in voting! I vote this magnificent piece of poetry with a 10
It is so kind of you Dillip to have read and commented on this poem time and again! Thank you so much.
A lovely write on the effects of rain over plant life and on the heart of a sensitive heart.
What a beautiful poem! As a reader, I get delighted in reading it time and again! You have used your powerful ‘gossamer thread’ here to ensure a stable flight of your kite! ....Rain has its abode in heavens so high/And hides behind clouds of mournful gloom/In silver strings, it spans the Earth/And cleanses the plants in resplendent gleam! A great piece of work!
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7/18/2025 1:13:43 AM # 1.0.0
This poem vividly captures the dramatic arrival and departure of rain, portraying it as a cleansing force that transforms the landscape. The imagery of torrents, puddles, and the aftermath paints a picture of nature's refreshing and soothing touch. Brilliant.