From winter freeze
To summer heat
The fire still rages
Am I captured by love?
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wow....i have no words..good job...my eyan..
there are word that can never be spoken in the wake of your poems but we who comment on them try the best we can. cold frost or summers heat, our souls alone we can not complete. thanks as all ways for a great read.10
we all a sucker of love indeed, since all human beings need to love and be love. Poignant it is yet you have made a powerful poem, dark for your chosen words......Love truly is a mystery, we dont know sometimes the key to one's heart..... sometimes we think so hard yet the answer is just simple how to melt the frozen locked heart...you are doing great my friend........loved your poem! ! ! I wonder who is the lucky woman who have captured ur heart? ? ? 10s
i love this poem it is so DEEP and HEARTFELT i think you are an amazing poet i also love the way it rolls of the tongue i would love to see, ore poems like this
Nice piece Eyan guess we've all been a sucker for love at some time.
sad but beautiful, nice written. try to enjoy your life and be happy. I bless you in the name of Jesus!
Clouds of hatred cover my heart, because she will never be mine.. you have captured human emotions very well in this poem..very well written poem and thanks for sharing your work with me..10 ++
Good poem, Eyan, lost love, very good write. thanks for the invite. lynn
'From winter freeze / To summer heat / The fire still rages / Am I captured by love? / Keys to her heart / Will not open / But open for others! / Sweet thoughts comes to light / Throughout the night...', touching lines.
The good poem eyan...............keep up the good work..........but one must not be bittter in love..
Passionate and painful Eyan with great strong imagery. 10 Karin
sad...yet...sweet... Love is....sometimes like that... We seek and we found We love and lost... The title runs with depth...pain in it.. great...words are hitting to the heart.. 10 Lovelots, maia
let the heat made the ashes fly........... love is always beautiful and take it as it is whom loved always lovable........that is what love......
wow you use unbelievably beautiful language in your poetry.....its amazing