Monday, September 28, 2009

. A Sucker For Love (Dark) Comments

Rating: 3.1

From winter freeze
To summer heat
The fire still rages
Am I captured by love?
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Eyan Desir
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Cynthia renee 22 November 2009

wow you use unbelievably beautiful language in your poetry.....its amazing

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wow....i have no words..good job...my eyan..

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

Love, the elusive thing! Well done

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Last hakkaobake 10 October 2009

there are word that can never be spoken in the wake of your poems but we who comment on them try the best we can. cold frost or summers heat, our souls alone we can not complete. thanks as all ways for a great read.10

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Catrina Heart 08 October 2009

we all a sucker of love indeed, since all human beings need to love and be love. Poignant it is yet you have made a powerful poem, dark for your chosen words......Love truly is a mystery, we dont know sometimes the key to one's heart..... sometimes we think so hard yet the answer is just simple how to melt the frozen locked heart...you are doing great my friend........loved your poem! ! ! I wonder who is the lucky woman who have captured ur heart? ? ? 10s

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Rebecca Harvey 08 October 2009

i love this poem it is so DEEP and HEARTFELT i think you are an amazing poet i also love the way it rolls of the tongue i would love to see, ore poems like this

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Patrick A. Martin 06 October 2009

Nice piece Eyan guess we've all been a sucker for love at some time.

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Danny H 04 October 2009

The point of view, was terribly clever keep it up :)

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Angel's lyre 04 October 2009

sad but beautiful, nice written. try to enjoy your life and be happy. I bless you in the name of Jesus!

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Tharindu Atukorala 03 October 2009

Clouds of hatred cover my heart, because she will never be mine.. you have captured human emotions very well in this poem..very well written poem and thanks for sharing your work with me..10 ++

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Lynn Glover 03 October 2009

Good poem, Eyan, lost love, very good write. thanks for the invite. lynn

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Obinna Eruchie 03 October 2009

'From winter freeze / To summer heat / The fire still rages / Am I captured by love? / Keys to her heart / Will not open / But open for others! / Sweet thoughts comes to light / Throughout the night...', touching lines.

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* Stephen *king 03 October 2009

The good poem eyan...............keep up the good work..........but one must not be bittter in love..

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The Lost.. 03 October 2009

nice poem, happy to read it and thanks for the invitation :)

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Ramin Chaman 03 October 2009

A nice poem..and sweet..and a little a sad sight.

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Mubeen Sadhika 03 October 2009

great feeling. amazing narration. wonderfully written

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Srishti ds 03 October 2009

sad piece..nicely penned..

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Passionate and painful Eyan with great strong imagery. 10 Karin

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Miriam Maia Padua 29 September 2009

sad...yet...sweet... Love is....sometimes like that... We seek and we found We love and lost... The title runs with depth...pain in it.. great...words are hitting to the heart.. 10 Lovelots, maia

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rago rago 29 September 2009

let the heat made the ashes fly........... love is always beautiful and take it as it is whom loved always lovable........that is what love......

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