Friday, April 10, 2015

A Successful Romantic Marriage Comments

Rating: 5.0

A pre marriage courtship is a lovely adventure,
Being attracted to beauty, playing hides and seeks,
Waiting for hours on the road opposite to a bedroom,
On the first floor just to have a glimpse of a teen aged girl,
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Hazel Durham 12 April 2015

A superb write on romance from the beginning through to marriage with all the passion and then the compromise over the years to adjust to daily life that anything can happen!

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Neela Nath Das 11 April 2015

A wonderful poem.Enjoyed reading.

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Valsa George 11 April 2015

Very youthful indeed! ! A pre-marriage romance on a windy evening in summer or on a sunny noon that comes after a cold foggy morn or on a moon lit night on a river bank..... wonderful time and great rendezvous for the lovers to meet! If this romance frutions into marriage where the couple understands each other and is willing to accept each one's strengths and weaknesses.... Oh, that would be wonderful! Enjoyed this great write on love!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 April 2015

Very wonderfully drafted poem with romantic moments. Each step explanation has special schedule. Nice one.10.

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 April 2015

Liked the message that a romantic marriage can be successful only if the two accept each other both, the positive and the negative things that are present in every human being.....................10

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