Saturday, August 27, 2016

A Successful Man (Being Inspired By A Poem Of Rajnish Managa) Comments

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I am firm and sure rather obstinate,
while slipping down on a slope,
I am tied firmly and shall not fall,
there is with me an unseen rope,
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M Asim Nehal 29 August 2016

Superb poem, a long journey of life nicely summed up covering each stage effectively and efficiently, to acknowledge is the supreme greatness and we humans often forget to do it, you have done it in a nice way and as I read the comments by Kelly, Rajnishji etc....the mutual love and respect is very much evident. Janab yet another masterpiece poem....10+++

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Khalid Saifullah 28 August 2016

A nice and wonderful write...........................

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Rajnish Manga 28 August 2016

Thanks for referring me as the inspiration of this poem. I am humbled. Through this wonderful poem, you have given a brief account of your journey of life- from childhood to the present stage- your unseen ropes, successes and achievements. What more one can aspire. By passage of time I now analyze, How nicely I turned my pain in pleasure, Wealthy I shall die with pearls and gems....

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Kelly Kurt 28 August 2016

Rajnish will be pleased with your efforts. Success is often subjectively rated, and biased towards accumulation of wealth or status. I have neither, but I have healthy, happy, good children. I consider that success

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Rajnish Manga 28 August 2016

Of course, I am pleased as you said. You are really fortunate to have children blessed with health, happiness and goodness. May they succeed in life (success, though subjective, always feels good) . Thanks.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 August 2016

Kelly Kurt, by the words pearls and gems I meant good thoughts, good ideologies and good character.

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Abduhoo Salamath 27 August 2016

wow great poem.... you are the most successful as a poet....well done. and thanks for sharing..

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