Friday, February 4, 2011

A Students Cry Comments

Rating: 4.3


I see light years ahead
My struggles, I see the payoff…
Not in prices of lands of corn fields
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Jenny Gordon 12 February 2011

Beautiful, delightful! You captured so much in this depiction simply titled, yet containing so much....the miserable struggle so aptly described, concluding rather poignantly and again excellently describing the reason for it all. Well-written! It's an perfect snapshot, so quietly contained in that simple title....I like it very well!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 February 2011

Amazing poem. Your observation is quite right. Really a nice attempt. I love it. Keep it up. Please read my latest poem 'Bravo Egypt! '

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Heather Chernen 04 February 2011

Very well written; boisterous, passionate, sardonic!

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