I see light years ahead
My struggles, I see the payoff…
Not in prices of lands of corn fields
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Amazing poem. Your observation is quite right. Really a nice attempt. I love it. Keep it up. Please read my latest poem 'Bravo Egypt! '
Beautiful, delightful! You captured so much in this depiction simply titled, yet containing so much....the miserable struggle so aptly described, concluding rather poignantly and again excellently describing the reason for it all. Well-written! It's an perfect snapshot, so quietly contained in that simple title....I like it very well!