A Stroll In The Park Comments

With a rainbow of all colours in a wonderful arc, At last holding hands as they stroll in a tranquil park.....10

Excellent ending. Complex in its simplicity and simple in its complexity. Well done my friend!

Finally at the end of her stroll she is now comfortable in her own skin, appreciating life and accepting herself. Beautiful words Hazel. Your heart always finds a way

A great poem, love the last stanza, it brings it all together.

Like freeing a captive dove to fly..So Beautiful write. Loved reading it..Beautiful poem.

written with a good flow with a serenity state of mind. love your write. keep it up.

A happy ending to a sad tale - great write Hazel.

Like a psychologist peering into the inner depth of human mind, you have gone deep into the complex divide in her, unearthed the secret fears, sense of chronic insecurities, the resultant erratic moods etc etc...! Anyway the presence of an understanding man who in the end hopes to free a captive dove to fly to skies blue is a refeshing close to a wonderfully beautiful poem! !

What a reading into her mind have you done Hazel? This poem is educative and appealing too besides being a well crafted feast for the eyes and discerning minds.

This poem reminds your friendship and gives her a chance to change to rearrange her scarred mind,